天星小輪服務改善問卷調查
https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/ZCVK666因為PROJECT需要,唔該各位用D時間做問卷,TNANK YOU
Done.:handshake
BTW try to revise the grammar:)
tracytracy1998 發表於 2015-11-24 17:16
Done.
BTW try to revise the grammar
for example?
本帖最後由 rkkwan 於 2015-11-26 14:04 編輯
groom1002 發表於 2015-11-25 18:33
for example?
"I am Lingnan Institute of Further Education student, I am conducting survey for Hong Kong Star Ferry service improvement"
漏咗兩個 "a"。Student 之後句號啦，兩個完整句子唔係就噉放個逗號連住。另外後面都有D勉強。
"...because of scholarship..."
咩叫 becuase of scholarship?申請scholarship? 定係乜？
"...please the interviewees spend little time to answer, thank you!"
Interviewees?我哋嚟 Interview?
Please the interviewees?Spend little time to answer?你句嘢好明顯廣東話直譯。
未睇下面，但你D英文真係唔得囉！
已改,thank you
有些題目是跳題,否則無效
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